All Comments on 'The Hot Summer Pt. 01'

hard read as she becomes a he and such. you need to read and correct all the errors.

meh....this isn't very well thought out, it king of sucks.

Put this shit in the tranny section where it belongs, so we're tricked into reading it. Each to their own, but don't be deceitful. Geez Louize.

Not a bad story overall, but many errors and inconsistencies that ruin the experience.