All Comments on 'The Hot Tub'

by DaniHarris21

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Poacher11Poacher112 months ago

A lovely story looking forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Great start, he sure will be surprised when all of his clothes ar

e soaking wet and none have been dried!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Keep going, it was good

ThatOneGuy551ThatOneGuy5512 months ago

Great story. This for sure needs a part 2

sirgrunt99sirgrunt992 months ago

I hope there is A part 2.

I just need to know how he made out from that weekend.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

It's a great story it's my imagination of part 2

Polly and Anna are joined by two more girls and they play a prank on him and take him naked outdoors

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Please continúe it, I really Wanna see how long he manages to hide his nudity

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Love it! Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Please continue the story. It’s a good story and has great potential.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Please continue, want to see what he agrees to to win back his clothes? Lots of possibilities here.

DaniHarris21DaniHarris21about 1 month agoAuthor

Wow, thank you for all your supportive comments. I wasn't sure about this story, so had deliberately left it open, although I had drafted a couple of follow up points to cover. Interestingly some of them meet what has been suggested already. So, as it seems to be popular I am writing chapter 2 for you all which should be submitted shortly. Thanks again for your comments and voting, they really make a difference to what and when i write. Dani

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Hello. Welcome. I'm Dani. Author of Lucy's Lingerie and other Dani Harris Adventures. Writing has been my hobby for years and finally technology has allowed me to publish my works. I shall gradually update this as I go along. Look out for news of my up and coming releases. I...