All Comments on 'The Hotel Ch. 02'

by NaturalHammer

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Locksley7Locksley7about 1 month ago

Omg, I can't believe how much I came to this story............excellent!

AmbulAmbulabout 1 month ago

Wow! Even though the author’s stories are very repetitive in their overall trajectory, each one is a gem of depraved eroticism. As in all his stories, Emily becomes drug-addicted and cannot get enough cock in her. In this story Chris is a close-in voyeur, which is what he really wants. He wants to see his wife turned into a junkie whore, a sex object, good only to please strange men for money. Emily will come back to their hotel room, but her life has changed. She will take the drugs left for her and will return to the street with the other whores that night for drug fixes and cock. Emily is one of them now. She will not return to their home. The story, like the author’s stories, do not have an emotional pull, but they do have a powerful and almost magnetic pull. Emily seemingly has lost her humanity, has become just a receptacle for cock and drugs. Her inexorable and willing descent into a life of depravity where normal rules no longer apply is described in detail. The inevitable end, if one can call it that, and the new life for Emily, now a junkie whore, has narrowed to one of fucking strange men for money, getting high from coke, meth, and heroin, and getting cock-induced orgasms. In this world, STDs, pregnancy, and her former life are of no concern. Brilliant writing. I would love to read a story where beautiful and very big-breasted Emily goes on an entirely new adventure that is not quite so dark and where the end could be surprising.

GreyDuckGreyDuckabout 1 month ago

"Depraved eroticism" describes this to a tee! Very hot and well-written. I do like how the husband at least recognizes the danger for Emily and puts up some semblance of a struggle - at least in his head.

please keep writing!!

EmmeluringenEmmeluringenabout 1 month ago

This is perfect! But I hate that this is the end. I'd love to know where this would lead!

debbie2freedebbie2freeabout 1 month ago

i dont see the horror so many other places this could go.. sorry it was a good story though

alexetlaurealexetlaureabout 1 month ago

5 stars .... Great eroticism !

AnonymousAnonymous29 days ago

Great story need more chapters, hard on reading each page.

auhound49auhound4927 days ago
PLEASE MORE!!!!!!!!

This is a nice story line as Mr. Mo seems to be plotting Emily's impregnation, turning her into a breeding whore, a prostitute for both sex and procreation. Have her rent out not only her vagina but her uterus as well. Most excellent!

Now we get to see what happens. Does Emily get the morning after pill? Is all birth control for her now banned? How soon does Claire find out and start working with her mom? Is Claire also impregnated?

Please take this at least through testing for pregnancy by both Emily and Claire and hopefully through both births. I wonder if the bastards from random paid fucks get takenfrom both by Mo and friends.

HighBrowHighBrow26 days ago

Why only two parts?…

Blackjack666Blackjack66621 days ago

Puh, this is a really dark and hot tale. As usual had to read it fast and partly at first then have it sink in before I started reading it slowly back and force. Now I have translated it to my wife. She agrees that this is about the scene NH wanted to show us as hot as possible and that it should end here.

We really enjoyed it!!

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An avid erotica reader for over 20 years. Now starting to write them. Always dreaming of what these stories could be like in real life if I had the balls to make them happen. Each series is 100% independent, but includes the same characters. None of the series overlap or int...

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