All Comments on 'The Hotwife'

by OctaviaSLaureate

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Amazing!

I loved this story. Very hot and arousing!

Well written and thought out. Lovley dic(k)tion and depiction :) 💕

ShadowRosieShadowRosieover 4 years ago
Nice plot work

Good plot work. Spelling needs a bit of checking and correction. " My breathe grew low and heavy," should be " My breath grew low and heavy." (without the e on breath). But, don't let that stop your writing.

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We have been writing for several years, only recently jumping into Erotica. We have many pieces we are currently working to get out there and always appreciate, and reciprocate, feedback.