All Comments on 'The Indecent Project Ch. 01'

...and not in the good way!

nice start and nicely writen with anticipations and many possible roads..i go see number two

thanks

Could possibly be an interesting idea, but the writing is very poor.

Even the very first sentence: "There were little similarities..." Does that mean there definitely were noticeable similarities between the women, although they were minor; or does it mean there were very few similarities between the women?

And at one point an "I" creeps in, although the story is in the 3rd person. Editing and grammar correction needed.