by fictitiousfucks
Excellent fantasy story. I have always enjoyed an eager lover and your girl is quite enjoyable, as a character. I hope you have time to write more chapters and allow her mentor to teach her how to make love with her mouth and how to enjoy other sexual activities before she is even tempted to give up her virginity.
Great story, very erotic and direct without being overbearing with extraneous life histories.
I'd love to see her mentor give her a reciprocal training in fellatio and rimjobs before he mounts her.