All Comments on 'The Island: Pt. 05 - The Dinner'

Folks, as always I'd appreciate any comments. Cheers.

From my perspective Reluctance is always sexier than Non Con, because consent is sexy. It was obvious that the PA was submissive but I hate blackmail with a passion. Yeah she was moronic enough to steal (badly) and got caught, crime doesn’t pay. It doesn’t make what he’s doing acceptable at all. She’s only traded one kind of trauma for another; sexual abuse instead of a prison sentence. It’s irrelevant that she’s likely to enjoy parts of it.

So that situation is going to determine whether or not I read all of the story. I should stress that my comment should have zero impact on what you write or what you think you should write, because it’s not my story. It is a good piece of writing, it flows well and is suspenseful in the right places.

Tess (uk)