All Comments on 'The Jack-Off Pt. 02'

Nice writing. I hope Melvin will make him wear a wedding dress and bridal lingerie before taking his virginity. Then, he should make him into a sissy (clothes, makeup, chastity cage, tattoos) and whore him out.

sucking cock in front of my wife was one of the things she demanded when she started cuckolding me. She knew i harbored gay desires.

lucky johnnie i wonder how fem Daddy will make * will cindy help him become the Faggot he is meant to be

your stories are soo HOT thank you

Well, since I'd like to strut on stage for a room full of horny men, I'd really like to hear about johnnie's dancing career, however short that may be.

Loved story and your others.

Turn him into full fledged sissy and let him enjoy life from that perspective

Dress him up full en femme and have him become a slut faggot for black marines exclusively

laser his hair off and enforce him wearing high heels and teach him to walk and act as effeminately

as possible ........make one slip and Melvin beats his white ass red ............QoS tat on his butt cheek

anklet + small tasteful medallion strung around a light gold chain proclaiming the inferiority of the white race / finale: all Melvin's white bitch ho's... 20 or so, strut their stuff at the jiggle joint ..........many white bitches will be drenched in Black piss etc etc

I believe Melvin will breed Johnnie. Then Melvin would have Johnnie initiated to his club by having as the center of a gangbang that ends with a bukkake. Melvin will then have Johnnie suck and fuck his old squad of Marines.

Thanks for the many and great suggestions. I really do appreciate them. You all seem to be in agreement that johnnie should accept his fate.

Just so you know, one thought I had was johnnie going home, pulling on a pair of his wife's panties. Seeing how feminine they made him look and feel, he suddenly has second thoughts, packs his shit and drives away. From your responses, that is not to be.

Thank you and watch for Part 3 coming soon.

It will end just like all the others. Husband and wife get turned out and thrown away after they are used up. It’s funny how trailer trash couples like this can be convinced of anything.

Very good

Wonderful writing to throughly enjoy petting myself.

Johnnie gets seduced by a smooth operating undercover cop, with a bigger cock than Melvin’s! The handsome crooked gay cop ensnares Johnnie and Cindy to help incriminate Melvin’s enterprises and thus influence. Cindy & Johnnie become willing sex slave informants for the next sleazy club the old white city fathers want closed down.

W~*

great story as always after he shaves himself smooth & puts on panties he realizes he is gone full sissy he begs Melvin to take his ass while Cindy watches & encourages him to be the cock hungry slut he is & johnnie accepts this

Love this (and your other work!) Another great sissy story. Let's get Herb more involved! Maybe Herb sees Johnnie in his panties and has to have him? And Johnnie has to choose between giving himself to Herb or saving himself for Melvin?

loving the wedding dress idea. maybe melvin shoul marry all four of them as the beginning of his harem. also imagining group cock worship ... two or three at melvin's cock and balls, the other getting to kiss him, be claimed by melvin's mouth. maybe one can switch off to rimming for a while. would be crowded but worth it for all of them :).

Love where this storey is going. Well done.

BARF. Nothing else needs to be said.