All Comments on 'The Jock and the Virgin Ch. 02'

There was a lot going here to hold the interest of the reader, especially with that brief rumble at the campsite. This story continues to build nicely just like Lucas and Caleb's relationship seems to be doing.

Caleb's perspective is just so fun to read haha, what an adorable dork.

Great work on writing this!

For me it’s kinda hard to believe these are college guys. They sound more like junior high school guys. The kinky stuff is hot though. Still looking forward to the next chapter.

Cum filled my boxers, fucking hot.

DAMMMMMNNNNN!!!!! MORE! MORE! MORE!!!!

Sensual, sexy and sweet. Your grammar (mentioned in your bio) and word choice is charming. What will the world outside of the tent hold for these boys?

The cock worship was great and Lucas innocence is refreshing as well. You did a nice job with explaining that Caleb was ready for a more serious relationship.