The Journey of David and Becky Ch. 11

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I stood up and walked towards the door.

"Where are you going?" Becky asked.

"I thought you'd finished with me; I was going to get a drink."

"No, no, no, you have to watch, sit there. I don't want to deny you the pleasure of watching us both working on Liam."

Becky smiled cruelly at me, then began to kiss Liam's face while Gina, on his other side, did the same. Gina glanced towards me and our eyes locked. She stopped kissing for a moment and smiled sexily at me before running her tongue around Liam's earlobe. He shuddered with pleasure.

"I have an idea, Becky," said Gina. "You gave David a chance to reduce his time in the cock cage, I want another bet to see if we can extend his stay in it."

"What did you have in mind?" she asked.

"David, how long do think Liam could last if we both suck his cock?"

"About thirty seconds," I answered.

"Ok, how many days are you prepared to bet?" Gina asked.

"If we can make him come in thirty seconds, you're back up to nine days," said Becky, excited by Gina's idea, "if we can't, you get released tomorrow."

I thought for a minute. Liam had had sex loads of times, as sexy as the two of them were, they may struggle to make him come that quick. "Ok, I'll take that."

The clock on the wall had a second hand, Becky nodded towards it. "When the second hand gets to twelve, we start. Are you ready Gina?"

Gina smiled and started tweaking Liam's nipples, Becky followed Gina's lead and did the same. As soon as the second hand reached twelve, both girls went down on Liam, licking his penis, taking turns sucking the head, wrapping hands around the stem and stroking it quickly up and down. Liam was very quickly approaching orgasm with what the sexy, naked girls were doing to him. And at just twenty seconds, the first squirt of his ejaculation burst forth, spraying Becky's mouth and nose. Gina plunged her mouth around the penis to take the second pulsation of come. Becky's hand pumped the penis before edging Gina out of the way so she could take more of the thick cream in her mouth. Gina licked Becky's face and Liam's groin, lapping up as much come as she could with Becky joining in. Liam lay back enjoying the pleasure the two girls bestowed upon him.

"Back to nine days, I think, loser!" Gina goaded, pointing her finger childishly and pulling her tongue out at me.

Becky laughed, Liam's come dripping off her chin. "Sorry, David, 'fraid she's right."

I couldn't believe I'd accepted this second gamble after reducing the time in my cage after the first gamble, now I'd ended up losing what I'd gained.

Coming next in Chapter 12: A confession from Gina.

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Jane362534Jane3625347 months ago

I love the way this is written, it's so nice to have fun caning someone who doesn't enjoy it. In my work I get to punish lots of men and sometimes females but I only really enjoy it when they either are made to receive a caning they don't really enjoy or I can push them past there limits. Obviously as they are paying for the experience we can't go as far as I would like. David being unfairly caned by Gina is wonderful. Please don't make him a masochistic who starts enjoying pain. Much more fun if he hates being punished.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The story took an unfortunate turn when the caning was introduced. According to the story the caning was excruciating and from the dialogue clearly exceeded David’s tolerance. Where was Katy’s love for Him? Where was her primary duty of keeping him safe? Where was the aftercare? Why did he not have a safe word?

Yet in the story, he rose promptly from his agony to participate in two ridiculous bets and give Gina oral sex that was out of this world!

Well every story is how the author writes it, but when it suddenly departs so sharply from what it had been it’s jarring to the reader. J.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Epic tragic-comedy by now! I find myself laughing at this idiot's misfortunes!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

why would he stay with the whore and let that other slut cane him time to toss the both of them to the road Gina is a thief and he gets punished for it hardly must be a man hating lesbian writing shit like this

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well, it has been a really good read with David falling further and further behind, and under, his living wife's femdom and control. Becky has promised him huge orgasms as he will be able to do anything to her since David has been so good under her control. Yeah, right. And the checks in the mail, works too. I keep hoping that David does get some good long relief, but it will probably be just a ruined orgasm as Becky laughs her head off.

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