All Comments on 'The Journeys of Kiba'

by Slappy101

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great story

I really enjoyed this story. A wolfman, a birdwoman and a cat woman; those are some interesting people to have in a story. I hope there are more journeys of Kiba.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great!

Amazing Story! I loved it! and im not just saying that because Akhaani is based off of my char <smooches>

-Akhaani

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
The story would have been much better ...

... if the main character didn't come across as such a jerk :-(

Slappy101Slappy101about 14 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you for your feedback "Anonymous", I understand what you mean. What I was going for with this story though is a darker tone, and a realistic character, he's not really a hero, more of an anti-hero. Not everyone will like that, but hopefully you were still able to enjoy the story a bit. Check out some of my other work and maybe you will enjoy that more.

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