by paper_miracle
Very, very good start, I can't wait for more!
Just the same and when is the next chapter?
John
Interesting so far. Looking forward to the rest.
A good start. So get cracking on the ol' computer and get the next chapter done and posted.
Thanks
J.
good story would have liked it to be longer i get into these story an love to read more .
Good story would love to read another chapter .