by paper_miracle
Good story would love to read another chapter .
good story would have liked it to be longer i get into these story an love to read more .
A good start. So get cracking on the ol' computer and get the next chapter done and posted.
Thanks
J.
Interesting so far. Looking forward to the rest.
Just the same and when is the next chapter?
John
Very, very good start, I can't wait for more!