by Jazzy_Bee
A little to extreme a reaction given the character's background. Needs more struggle and at least emotional conflict. As is, it lacks tension. 3*
Yet another cheating whore story, posted by a fake account (the LW whore stories so often) come from new fake accounts with just 1 story). Deliberately trolling the readers for a negative response? I hope it's worth the bother of writing shit like this.
Don't know about your story, and this is not your fault, but I hate this new format Literotica is determined to force on us.
If this continues, then I for one will cease my daily trawl through the site.