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by SelectRedux

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Could have been ok, but use of the present tense made it stilted

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Excellent story-telling; worthy of a follow-up. How does he remind her of his affections as she sets off for her new job? Butt-plug? Vibrating technology managed via her smartphone (so that she is always in range?

This story could become a series; thanks for writing.

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I previously published over 100 erotic stories - mainly with a spanking theme - on Literotica, writing as 'Laurel Aspen'. Currently reposting updated and edited versions of the best, along with new narratives.