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Anonymousabout 4 years agoCould have been 5 star
Story was fun and fantastical. The typos were extremely minor that a cursory edit would have found those out and kept us in the story.
Timtom12about 4 years agoNot bad
I think you forgot that he didn't have his phone and so couldn't text his girlfriend in the morning...
Might be worth finding a volunteer editor in the forums.
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