All Comments on 'The Light Between the Trees Ch. 12'

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

WOW! Great story. I have some guesses on where this could go and I can't wait to see if any of them are close to correct.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

This has been in a really dark place for a while, but I keep reading, hoping Chloe will get to a better place. Which means you've done a great job.

MikePaulWritesMikePaulWrites10 months ago

Whoa. Can't wait to see where you take this. Absolutely five stars.

joy_of_cookingjoy_of_cooking10 months ago

I'm with anonymous. This isn't sexy and hasn't been for chapters. But I keep reading. I get excited every time I see you've posted another chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

50/50 he's a serial killer or spectrumy guy who wants to see what he can do

dev_pafrdev_pafr10 months ago

it’s like you’re taking my biggest fantasy out of my head

ToranAllairesToranAllaires10 months ago

I love the way you ended this! There's so much more of this story and I'm glad we'll get to read it. Great work!

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At last we begin, and from the smallest of things: a mistake. Cassie asked for the free will to make her own choice at the end of Wonderland, but she did something unexpected. Instead of keeping free will for herself, she gave it to her nemesis, Lily. Now Lily is free to wand...