All Comments on 'The Limited Boyfriend Experience Ch. 04'

by lash2718r

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Frankfiredawg06Frankfiredawg063 months ago

This story is going down hill

hindsight2020hindsight20203 months ago

No! It is not going downhill! It is plummeting off a cliff!

WhackdoodleWhackdoodle3 months ago

Why even bother writing if this is the best you could do.

After rehashing the previous two chapters, she goes straight for having a child with a different man. The duck you think that’s going to do when, not if, the kid does a 23 and Me test?

Why not just divorce Bon since she would rather have Gordon baby then her husbands.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Short and to the point. Also she was cheating and may pay the price, very good.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Yawnnnn become very very boring!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

This is way out of hand and it shows she's just another cheating whore and her husband is a dumb cuck. Unless he catches her soon, I'm done with this.

HighBrowHighBrow3 months ago

Now you’ve gone and ruined it for me,,,

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I so hope she gets knocked with his child.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Please, please, please find a new hobby!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

This is just plan crap. Fits with the rest of your stories nicely though.

Mike_0691Mike_06913 months ago

DNA TEST??????????

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

This story is not going down hill it's already in the gutter -10

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Calling the writing bad does bad a disservice. Calling the plot ridiculous gives ridiculous a bad name... I could go on and on but even watching grass grow is preferable to this

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