All Comments on 'The Long Awaited Vacation - Day 01'

Then I am done and there will be another Author I don't read

cucks get one star

dont be a lying sack of shit author who doesnt use the cuck tag

Not much of a story. Maybe if they took it back to the room.

To the idiot who says he hates stories of sharing a wife with a stranger: This entire category if about wives enjoying sex with other men. Go read stories you might be able to relate to in the gay category. And for the love of god, stop posting in all caps. What are you, 12?

This was hot. I can’t wait 4 part 2.

It’s very obvious that all the bullshit comments are written by one sad little man. I’m not sure what his motivation is? Who does he think he’s impressing? His life must really suck if this is how he spends his days.

Wow another repressed gay writer story. Read more like a nakedcraving cast off because it was too stupid and horribly written to even be posted by him.

One half decent story, one pure shit gay story....go lick odoreaters chin clean, closet boy.

Head off to the Gay section, you'll be more at home and better appreciated.

Obviously this will not turn out well for either of them.

Unlike most of the tools in the comment section I actually appreciate wife sharing fantasy etc. but this was shit

Ughh!

Not what i expected!

3

Not the best written story, in a public place albeit dark, the positions could not have been achieved.

Take no notice of stupid remarks, don’t they know what is happening on Literotica?

Keep going.

very good. Looking forward to more

100% of the dialogue is: 'You wanna dance?"...That's it. No conversations, no discussions, no tension, nothing. 2nd person...mostly, but coupled with it being nothing more than a cuckold wet dream narration made the story even more awful. Tags aren't that difficult, a worthwhile explanatory intro isn't that hard either. unfortunately you plan to continue. Thanks for the warning.

On spring break lots of couples get caught up in drunken situations they regret the next day. My friend danced with a hot middle aged woman and her hubby . In the early morning drunken leaving the club as the sun came up he went to their room and bothe fucked her together. Hubby only was able to go twice but he fucked her many times being young , her a hot mom with kids his age and the thought of hubby being done and having to watch/listen. He took her ass so hard and she was telling hubby he’s fucking me up my virgin ass, I can’t believe it. He taunted now your taking a young dick your gonna want all your kids friends, you better watch out guy they all want to fuck her already. He tried to get them to come back to our room but hubby refused, said no way it was a drunken one off mistake but she wanted it bad . He said come on them and us can do a five on one. He did get a few blow jobs and fucked her one more time . During a happy game playing by pool the snuck off for a bj and a worker caught them . Threatening to call cops he said suck my Mexican dock and she did making her swallow then rubbed his dick all over her face laughing calling her a puta. Must happen often that travels wind up getting it from a local

Motorcycle got the whore revved up so she made little Tommy Boy a cuck.

A different life when one gets away from the constraints of normal life