All Comments on 'The Magus Provectus series Vol. 02'

by Daniel_Gray

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jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenover 3 years ago
Hello

Fantastic pair of stories. Valin seems like an interesting character and I'm eager to continue reading about his exploits. You can feel the rich history these characters have with each other, even with short introductions and its very nice. If the series stays relatively light-hearted as it has been so far that would be good. Though don't let some random comment steer the story away from where it would go on its own, this one's yours, and I'm more interested in reading more of it, rather than imagining my own paths.

Thank you for your story, be well and take as much time as you need for more. Though I do hope you continue xD

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