All Comments on 'The Maid's Motto Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Bit skeptical of this at first, but Defoe rly worth the read, Kara’s furniture play was amazing, I hope to see more of that in the future!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Katz’s furniture play was so erotic, really hope more furniture play occurs soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

What the fuck was that ending for Kat? We get introduced to her, then she meets Wallace, then she’s suspicious of what’s going on, then she’s a fucking clock, and now her soul is gone. We never got a resolution to anything, and we can’t now because there’s no way to continue that story. She has no free will. She never had free will. She is literally just an object now that orgasms every time it cleans something. Like, what was the red door? What about how they know so much about her? Maybe even, oh I don’t know, WHO THE FUCK DID THIS. Like, I know that you’re probably gonna make a part 4, but there is LITERALLY NO FUCKING WAY that it’ll resolve any of this.

HotForLitHotForLitover 2 years ago

Why did you stop?

Excellent story, would love more of it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

A mind bogglin story so much so 2 commenters can`t even get the characters name right

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