All Comments on 'The Majestic Oak Ch. 05'

You have me hooked - what a GREAT story... I'm eagerly awaiting the next episode. Will Rachel attend the prom? Will Pete and Kate ever make it "all the way" with Rachel? And what of Nadia and Rachel - and Tracy - is there another lesbian awakening on the horizon? And a threesome for Pete perhaps?... I can hardly wait for later chapters when Pete and Kate return on a subsequent weekend visit to the Majestic Oak as "seasoned sponsors"...

While your writing style and grammar may need a little polishing, you are a wonderful storyteller. The pace and layering of your narrative are absolutely perfect.

I didn’t hold much hope for this in the beginning but I have to admit I am really growing in appreciation as it progresses. That was a really gutsy chapter to take on. Cudos