All Comments on 'The Many Loves of Anna Marie Pt. 04'

I couldn't read through this as it's too confusing. In the first line you talk about (I assume Anna) feeding the twins and then going back to see George. A little bit later (years obviously) she's talking to George and saying she's not sure if they're identical or fraternal twins, or even girls. To be honest I haven't read the other parts as I've never seen them, but even if it's explained better in earlier parts, there should be a bit of summary to clear things up. Sorry, but only 1*.

To Anonymous

I debated long and hard whether I should take the time to discuss your issues with my story.

Sadly, I decided to answer your concerns.

I assume that you always pick up a book, flip to the last chapter, and expect to read the ending and expect everything to make sense.

At the start of Part 4, I did say it would help to read Part 3 first. If you had, you would have seen the last line of Part 3 which went: "As I fell asleep, I dreamed about my babies ..."

Reading that, you'd have had a clue that Part 4 started with a dream sequence. If you had bothered to read the first three parts of the story, you would have known it was a dream sequence about something that had never happened.

I do thank you for taking the time to tell me why you rated my story a 1* but in effect you rated your ability to read a story.

Wow, Beautiful writing, had me in tears at the.end

An excellent ending to this series. I too will miss Maonaigh. I didn't know him as you did, but I would look for his comments on every story that I read.

your friend would be proud i found your story emotional and entertaining as usual well look after your self be happy well and safe a fan shayne