All Comments on 'The Mission - Day 01'

Frist sentence: «Sitting in the dark hallway of her waiting room where she does to get therapy Lydia often wondered about all the people who would come and go.» This is surely an interesting sentence building. The rest was not very much better. Please proof read.

First story!

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Thanks for the comments. Since its my first story it took me a bit to figure out how to edit a published story. It will take a while for my edited version to replace my current one.