All Comments on 'The Mistress and Her Justice Ch. 13'

Please don't stop - let "justice" be done.

While I enjoy your writing, I have to say that I hope Justice is complete. I don't feel as though the Judge was truly punished, nor completely sorrowful for his actions. For the Mistress to extend such a kind offer of continuance, I think he is undeserving.

What a great read. Seems silly to leave it there would love to we the lawyer and prison screw get their just deserves

Unless she's willing to kill, once loose, she's going to jail or worse. And deserving worse.

You mean a complete clusterfuck right? I hate stories that are populated by people who appear to have IQ's in the single digits, that act without rhyme or reason and do so without creating any real interest for the reader. This was complete drivel.

When she had the Judge lick her pussy? He bit her clit clean off. The end. Boy this was stupid. Did you proof read this crap? It was truly horrible. Glad you stopped posting.

Well, well, idiot anonymous strikes again. If you don't have enough faith in your criticism to post under your own name, you're probably a fucktard.

Again, good job, kelmag... more would be nice, too!

Of stupidity, abuse and violence for no rhyme or reason. Awful writing.

More stories, and a greater writer. The use of many adjectives, made me feel as though i were in the Judge's place.

the judge is actually a perv who gets pleasure from the supposed punishment he's receiving. Kinda makes the whole story worthwhile.

Well, I really, really loved the retribution that the judge received. The revenge was described in vivid detail and one could almost feel like they were there as the judge received the cold blooded revenge from Katrina and her students. Describing that the judge slipped into a sub space feeling while he was severely tortured is often overlooked in many stories of this genre. I did not like that he liked what was done to him. I had hoped that they would continue with his torture until he finally passed out from shear exhaustion instead of them giving him some drug. THere is no description of how he felt when he came to in his car. His whole body would have been torn up and so sore that he could barely function. It would have been some time before he would have been able to drive his car. Was he even dressed or was his clothes with him so he could dress. His body would have been so bruised it would have taken days for it to recover enough. What did he do on the bench from that time forward? Oh well, the story was well written and described in detail what he experienced that is often glossed over. Very well done and very much appreciated.

The judge slowly relaxed his body and sat upright in his chair. His pain was incredible, his humiliation, total.

He slowly, painfully unlocked his desk drawer and pulled out a small black notebook. He opened it, scanned down until he found the name he wanted and dialed the number. After just two rings the call was answered but no one spoke. The judge simply said “Go ahead” and ended the call.

While the Judge lay in bed that evening watching the News Channel, he smiled as he saw the banner, Breaking News, scroll across the screen. Views from a helicopter showed a house in the hills on fire and as the camera panned in, you could clearly see a large number of bodies strewn around the grounds. The Judge started to smile as the camera picked out a statuesque red head and a petite Asian girl.