All Comments on 'The Mistress and the Mrs.'

Clever premise.

Well told.

But: You need to lern the difference between BREATHE an BREATH (which is what you meant).

And: You need to learn the difference between BOUNDED and BOUND (which is what you meant).

And: You need to learn thedifferencebetween OMISSION and ADMISSION (which is what you eant).

And: You need a proofreader/editor.

Nevertheless, four stars.

Really hot.

Keep going

The husband has great love for his Wife

This was really really good, would love to read more!

This is really really good, would love to read more!

yes please write more! love this situation.

Great story, details, dilemma, characters and length.