All Comments on 'The Most Wrong I Have Ever Been'

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Nice so far. Lose the belt.

Lose the belt , or go full on tying up games , apart from that a good start .

That was short, bit silly with the belt

I've got to agree about the belt, the story didn't really need it. It was cute and sexy before you decided to introduce the darker issue of the belt.

Otherwise, the story was good, especially for a shortie, and a first effort.

You write really well, and I'm looking forward to reading more from you! Keep Writing!

I was enjoying the story until narrator mentioned controlling the woman with a belt. I stopped reading right then. That’s disgusting.

Awful, you need to work up to your main female character becoming naked and giving the other character a blowjob. It doesn't

happen that fast.