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Click herePoor Heidi's arms were flailing about and she kept begging for more in a shaky voice. This kept Mom occupied so that when I slipped on the bed behind her she barely registered me kneeing her legs aside, or so I thought.
"No one's snuck up on me in bed in twenty years my Son," Sienna grinned back at me. "Good try though."
"Oh be quiet and take your enema like an obedient submissive, Mom," I growled back, my surprise ruined. Jumping Mom in the shower was going to be a peach too, no doubt. I was still having my moment over her though when I lined my phallus and pried open her ass with it. I was none too gentle going in but I did my best to use the same method of entry she had used on Heidi.
The bonus came when Sienna pushed her his up from poor Heidi, she engulfed my entire cock in the process then we both drove down Heidi. For a second I was afraid we might have seriously hurt the girl. Sienna pushed up, lifting my mass as well as her own.
"Heidi, are you okay?" I asked. Her left hand tapped the pillow twice.
"More," whimpered our slender freak.
When Sienna propelled herself down I elected to change our tempo so that I was driving down when Sienna was pushing up. Sienna screamed out in a savage howl, her rectum tightening all around my penis. Her resulting collapse nearly crushed Heidi.
I took the intermission period to pull out of Mom, slip off and discard the condom, put another on and then fall to my left. Mom caught my move and rolled over to her right, holding a blissfully exhausted Heidi in her grasp and on her strap-on vibrator.
"Don't stop yet," Heidi moaned. "I can still barely feel my toes."
"I think I can take care of that Heidi," I promised. I scooted in, lifted her free leg and rammed my still fiercely stiff rod deep inside her vagina. Heidi's eyes had been slightly hooded but when I did that they sprang open and she gasped soundlessly.
"Roll over Sienna," I directed. Mom shifted on top of me and now we had ourselves a Heidi sandwich.
Sienna and I began pistoning in and out of Heidi's holes. Mom slapped Heidi's thighs and ass-cheeks while I slapped her breasts and twisted her nipples. Heidi didn't last a minute. We barely gave her a break before going at her again. Her cheeks and tits were bright red when I ejaculated into the condom deep inside her womb. The heat of my seed finally shattered Heidi's stamina and she passed out.
"Oh, poor baby," Sienna soothed a sleeping Heidi. "Joshua, I'll go clean up. Do you want me to sleep in my room tonight? I'll understand."
"Heidi will want to be able to touch you when she wakes," I whispered, "and I'll want you close by too Mom." Sienna padded away allowing me to shift the covers gently over Heidi, who was still on my chest, and me.
I had just disposed of my second condom and was awake for Mom's return when she settled in silently beside us and after a while rolled onto her right side and lay an arm over Heidi's waist before she too drifted off. I lay awake a little longer, thinking over some of the things Heidi had confided and the huge holes she had left for me to try and fill in.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 5 years agoThere's a lot of over explaining and strange logic going on—it feels like you got a little lost in your own head here. The dialogue switches between being very good and fluid and then suddenly extremely amateurish, like constantly repeating names and addressing things people wouldn't actually do in real life.
The setting you've cooked up is quite engaging though. Really wish you had actually spent some time building up to the sister rather than just suddenly having him go, "Hi, come move in alongside our mom and my new sex-toy so I can fuck you, thanks."
Very strangely written story.
Gemini_Knightalmost 7 years agoAm I the only one who keeps picturing Zarya and D.va as Sienna and Heidi, respectfully? Uhh maybe it's a sign I've been playing too much Overwatch recently. But now I can get the image out of my head, but it is a very pleasing picture.
FinalStandover 10 years agoAuthorThat would make things:
*Joshua
*Heidi
*vTeela^
*vSienna^
(as Sienna and Teela would be competitive on who was on top)
*Natalie (sure she's on the bottom, but it is more of a case that everyone watches out for her and reinforces their love for her when needed - more mothering)
I'm not thinking of Teela moving in but of being an occassional switch with Sienna and Natalie. See, Sienna will willingly submit to Teela but will also defend Natalie against anything she (Natalie) is unsure about. Sienna is a Mother and Submissive; she can be one, the other or both. Sienna is the Mother Bear, willing to kill for her children (the Family) yet wanting to be submissive and controlled when the situation is safe. That is what my opinion anyway.
Also, Chapter 4 is written and will be at the editors today (10/13/13) or (13/10/13) for our friends in Europe.
Anonymousover 10 years agoIf both Natalie and Teela move in and agree to be Joshua's submissives that would be some awesome 4 on 1 group sex action.
Jounarover 10 years agoGreat stuff and looking forward to chapter 4. I don't get the Heidi hate at all as she is a vital part of the story and a fantastic character unlike Teela who add's nothing to the story imho.
Jp1987over 10 years agoListen commenters here's the facts, this is one of the best chain stories on here. The author does a great job of structuring the story, on that note positive feedback is always a good thing to help an author further his or her story. There are many things that make a story great but not all stories can be liked by everyone, however this one is pushing the mark and trying to. Keep it up Final, look forward to more soon.
Anonymousover 10 years agoI disagree that Heidi is not a important character she is a main one, Joshua has already said his heart belongs to all 3 and since she is his he would not share her as he has already said.
As for Teela me personally I am not liking her much, she is there with her girlfriend and she is already flirting with the other women and just feels like a outsider. Calling her a "friend" and whenever family is mentioned they clearly keep her out of it so I am hoping that's setting it up as she is a outsider, if Natalie moved in then what would she keep making appearances? move in as well?
I don't have a better idea of Joshua as the author so i don't know if he would sleep with her but as to where the other women are concerned she seems like she would mess up the balance of the 3 women he loves, plus his not sharing thing unless its with each other feels like it would extend to Teela too and depending on as I said Joshua he would just get with her himself.
BillyName99over 10 years agoI like where this has gone so far, but I do feel kind of sad for Teela. She was much more than Natalie's "friend".
Also, I am very pleased to see the improvement in writing mechanics. :)
LordSlamdawggover 10 years agoTo me, these characters have transitioned too fast and radically. The narrator started out with a bit of a Cary Grant/ Tom Hanks naïf about him. Now he's an uber-self assured Klaus Kinski/ Rutger Hauer. The zaney dynamic when Sienna/ Mom might challenge him for alpha status for delicious carnal tidbits like Heidi is gone.
The sister Natalie is about 100 x more interesting a character then Heidi in terms of a challenge. I like this author's choice of words, the initial matriarchial penetration scene was done with tenderness and much appreciated. Heidi is STILL wearisome, marry her off to rich heir ( or heiress ) . She's a guest star, not a regular.
This is way better then usual status quo story for this genre, no doubt. I won't say the thrill is gone, but much of ambiguity that gave this series such an edge has exited stage left. Hopefully future exploration of Natalie plot thread will give a spark that the energetic, elegantly worded, but increasingly shop worn anal play didn't do for this story segment. ****
Jounarover 10 years agoAnother great chapter and I hope many more are to follow.
@ tazmun
I agree 100%.
So many stories leave out the loving part of BDSM relationships so it's nice to see one that has it in bucketloads.
tazmunover 10 years agoI usually get angry when reading anything related to BDSM and I haven't a clue why I read it other then fantasizing about beating the crap out of all those arrogant Dom types. I usually see nothing loving about it, only reasons to make war and revenge. That's why it's weird that you actually have made this weird family situation really feel loving. Making the prison bitch Mom feel loved and wanted hits that warm fuzzy spot. The facts coming out to prove how much of a loving mom the prison bitch always has been and was only protecting her kids. Taking things on a face value and never looking for the real truth is a message we should all reconsider before deciding someone is dead to us.
I really like this story and hope you continue it!
