All Comments on 'The New Girl'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Skilful and imaginative writing.

StonewaterStonewaterabout 1 year ago

Looking forward to the next chapter.

clearcreekclearcreekabout 1 year ago

A well done story, especially the ending. I hope for more.

inthefirstpersoninthefirstpersonabout 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks for the comments. I hadn't really considered writing another part, as I came up with the ending first and it felt quite self contained. Maybe though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wonderful. More please

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I write these stories for my own enjoyment. I often write in the first person, but you shouldn't assume they are autobiographical. Some are true, others are pure fiction, but all of them address areas of sexuality that I personally enjoy. I hope you like some of them.