All Comments on 'The New Headmaster Pt. 03'

Still a fun series, but I felt this wasn’t up to the standard of the first two. The flow wasn’t as smooth, and it was difficult to follow how much was direct mind control and how much he’d changed them to want what he was doing. I still see a lot of potential in this, so hope you can steer it back to the story and not just to him getting his jollies. Watch for one error you kept repeating: one pussy, two pussies and her pussy’s heat.

Looking forward to you expanding on this story

Although I'm enjoying your story, as previously mentioned , its difficult to follow if things are "just happening" or is mind control at work ? You definitely need a good proof reader as the many errors detract from the readers enjoyment ;-)