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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Dumbest story yet!

Totally a waste of time. 0*

IainmoreIainmoreover 4 years agoAuthor
re Dumbest story whatever yet

Yeah your comment was dumb as what part of constructive criticism welcome don't you understand. Constructive it isn't ahole. Remove head from arse please Anon user. Too gutless to identify yourself again. On second thoughts, forget it, keep your head up your arse.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
zzzzzz........

Don't quite your day job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Too far

You have made the Graeme character just too unbelievably wimpy and accepting. For me it's now almost become a joke/spoof cuck story rather than erotic.

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Constructive criticism always welcome, that is constructive underlined. I go through obsessive writing bouts before the block strikes. I hope that getting feedback here will unblock those blocks that have plagued me in the past, When I get blocked with one story I will move...

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