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All Comments on 'The New Patriarchy: Floor Partners'

by Jessmartin

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KayiterKayiteralmost 3 years ago

Better than the previous version, BUT your use of pronouns is still all over the place.

JessmartinJessmartinalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Sorry, I'm trying to take more time to go through the stories, I always miss something, I'm trying to get an editor.

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