All Comments on 'The Old Man Pt. 01'

by SybianVronni

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LucieLou007LucieLou00719 days ago

Sexy story, enjoyed that now waiting for the next part :D

Dave747Dave74719 days ago

Excellent, exciting - more please.

AnonymousAnonymous19 days ago

I understand this is fiction, but it's completely outside the realm of reality.

AnonymousAnonymous19 days ago

Hot story. Would love more!!!

SybianVronniSybianVronni16 days agoAuthor

I have had over 40 p m since this posted asking for another part. I have submitted part 2 dear readers. For the anonymous person who trolls my stories if you don't like it don't read my stories. You are in a minority of one so far.

PaperbackreaderPaperbackreader16 days ago

Very good descriptive story. On to chapter 2.

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