All Comments on 'The Orgasm Pill'

Another part please.

Really hot. The daddy-daughter seduction arc is always fun, and transposing it into a setting like this is an awesome idea. I would love to see more from these characters but not really sure where you go now that the arc is already completed. Having Cameron become jealous of Lola's new boyfriend or seeing how she manages his releases in this new dynamic could be fun. Maybe something where he realizes that if he can resist tasting her for a month then the effects of the pill will wear off, and so he tries to resist while she seduces him further.

Great work!

Really hot. The daddy-daughter seduction arc is always fun, and transposing it into a setting like this is an awesome idea. I would love to see more from these characters but not really sure where you go now that the arc is already completed. Having Cameron become jealous of Lola's new boyfriend or seeing how she manages his releases in this new dynamic could be fun. Maybe something where he realizes that if he can resist tasting her for a month then the effects of the pill will wear off, and so he tries to resist while she seduces him further.

Great work!

So... Are we going to get more insight and explain on this chastity thing or....??

Is there a part 2? I need to know what happens.

Glad you liked it white_raven47. Am always looking forward to your next story! I agree this looks more like a one story arc. If anything I'd be tempted to go back and redo the whole thing with more detail and slower pacing.

This is always so sad. Such a great writing but u just have to use a completely fucked up femn*zi dystopia as a setting that would never work. Most men react with aggression to sexual frustration. That's the whole issue. So if u want to fix that problem locking them up makes it even worse.

No u would need to lock up the females so they can't get sexual satisfaction from anything but men therefor vastly increasing the chances of males getting laid therfore reducing rape and violence. (Not saying it's better morally. Its fucked up. Just saying it would be more effective)

Another great story. Incest adds a new dimension particularly by the way the daughter controls it. Well done!