All Comments on 'The Party Pt. 02'

Your writing style is clear, direct and very evocative! This causes your story line to move with appropriate speed, with resulting impact. You've portrayed rising tension and expectations. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for your effort -- and talent!

Thank you so much for reading and for your comments! I do appreciate them. Hopefully you’ll enjoy Part 3! ;-)

Alexa_R, you are the most compelling writer on Literotica!! The fact that you've lived much of these very erotic stories, combined with your very good writing skills, makes you my #1 writer on this forum!! Stay well girl, and keep writing!!

Oh my StrappySandals, what a beautiful compliment! I think my face just turned 50 shades of red blushing! Thank you so very much!!! I’ll try my best to keep my writing interesting and entertaining. ;-)

So we'll written a wonderful pre courcer to the main event. Everyone is dripping with excitement and anticipation.