All Comments on 'The Perfect Beginning Ch. 02'

"See, they aren't actually underage because in this setting we multiply the age of everyone by 10!"

Disgusting.

Still so uninteresting. I skimmed the pages anyway in case a passage was good. Unfortunately none...

Very immaturely written.

This times 3 pages out of 14 wold be enough. Does the author realize she is repeating herself? The style is even more childish than in the first part. I'm going to read the third part, hoping it won't be at the 7 year old level. This time it's only worth 3 stars.

The thing is, either a kink possesses you or it doesn't. If it doesn't, then it's long and boring. But, if particular kinks (humiliation, overpowered by someone younger, shameful spankings) tickle your erotic imagination, then it's gold.

Don't be discouraged by what people who aren't into it say. Keep writing and let the dark imagination carry you to places you never expected.

I eagerly await your next chapters.

Finally a world where girls want boys like me.