All Comments on 'The Perfect Haircut'

Good ending!!!

Same old nonsense nothing new here.

Decent story but no way a hair dresser is going to wear heels when she has to stand all day.

When an attribution (he said, she asked, etc.) follows the quote it isn't capitalized. If the quote precedes the attribution and would normally end with a period, you should use a comma instead.

Not bad for a first submission, not great, but not bad. I gave you a 3 for being brave enough to write and submit a story.

wow, so Guess only one cheater... if you don't count Larry.

Why, what's up?

Oh, usual stuff. Money, sex. Say, y'all wouldn't be interested in making a quick extra tip?

Are you asking what I think you're asking? We don't do that here.

Oh, well I was thinking a couple of hundred might change your mind?

Catherine, I'd like you to meet my husband Larry.

Larry, this is Catherine.

Today was Larry's birthday and I promised him something real special.

So the big question is are Mary and Larry going to let Bob have the same service?

Well, a fake marriage can be fun, too, I suppose.

Not really a story. Just some cheap sex.

Great. In the next chapter Catherine has sex with Larry and gives her husband a sloppy second. 1 star

How old are u? Ya know that pre pubescent horny hormonal teens are not allowed on this site?