All Comments on 'The Photographer'

The water made me anxious. Well told story of submission. Good Job!

Beautifully written with excellent build up of erotic tension!

Thank you.....

So intense and erotic. Yes, the water scene was scary, exciting and yet calming. I thought he was going to have anal with her for sure. Thank you for your story.

This story is very well written. Well paced. Erotic without being vulgar. Worthy of being published in a commercially. Perhaps in an erotica anthology.

Damn, I don’t what to say about discovering a diamond in an author that you search so long to read and relate. And this only the first read. All i can say is thanks for sharing your talent. Please continue your use of your skill.

Amazing story. You're a very gifted writer. Now I have to read more of your work.

Exquisitely written. The description and attention to detail were impeccable. The build up was masterful as well. You have a gift.

Wow, that was intense!

I liked the back and forth angles, and the sex sure progressed quickly.

Moving on to chapter 2! ;->