All Comments on 'The Plan'

I enjoyed the suspense of this piece, and the sensory delights along the way! It was a beautiful exercise in trust. Excellent first effort!

Did I miss some subtle esoteric message or was this entire story about an erotic shower in which he could shave her pussy? Beautifully written but with that verbose build up I expected at least a two carat diamond in a velvet box. the Ct. Yankee

Very good job for your first story, Thambok! I enjoyed it very much. The buildup, the trust issue and your descriptions held my interest. Congratulations.

Lovely, erotic story. Sometimes just a hint at what's to come is a wonderful way to go. :)

I wanted to tell you what an awesome job on the writing.