All Comments on 'The Pool Boy Pt. 04'

Your audience is shrinking faster than our hardons and so are your scores

This seems to escalated rather quickly. I am wondering if you may be trying to jam too many adventures into one story. However it's still very fun to read and I wonder where you might be taking this couple next. It's rather sad that the nasty little troll patrol has already started their nonsense with their rude comments. Thankfully it's a very small minority of the thousands who come here.

Why do you read all of these LW and cuck stories if you hate them so much?? I think it's because they remind you of your dead ex wife the whore who fucked over 100 men wile you cleaned her out every night!

he has to blow two guys, gets one so-so blowjob

she gets a royal fucking, and sucking

does not seem very balanced to me

he is set up to be nothing but a WACC cleanup boy

Who doesn’t like wall to wall sex?

I'm surprised by the nay-Sayers. must be homo-phobic - although the bisex is VERY mild. i agree with Geisha 1 - wall to wall sex. and very well written. 5 stars all the way!!!! loved it!!! MORE, MORE!!!

Ignore the haters. This is well written sex. On, on!

How does one anonymous poster know who another anonymous poster is? How do they keep one another straight? How do they know another anonymous got banned? Seems stupid to argue with your self, but that's what they are doing. No one is as badass as an anonymous keyboard warrior.

To find out who people are, either anonymous or not. No one is really anonymous online. No matter how much you try to hide. We know. Oh yes, we know.

Well written erotica. Love the opening dance scene and music selection. 5 starts !!!

LOL- get a kick out of those that advice the author to ignore comments. Do you morons really think an author is that stupid? He/she chose to allow comments, good or bad. Don't like them, they can delete them, showing us they have non backbone. It's that simple. The question is, why do you have a problem with comments that don't agree with your point of view. To each his own, show some tolerance.

Only his wife was fucking all men. He just watched. He was invisible to everyone in the room. Run, you stupid fag! You have no longer a marriage!

Run? Willing cuckolds enjoy being a cuckold, that's how they get off. They turn their wives into sluts and whores for their own pleasure. It's a sickness they can't get rid of, a nightmare for any shrink. They lack any morals established by society. It's a sickness.

I'm with 26thNC on this one. (And who is 27thNC and why specifically choose that handle?)

Despite the recognisability of some of the undifferentiated anonymice as claimed by one of their number (which one?), who claims to be able to recognise BonnieTaylor among the multitude of anonymous comments, having a name really does help when a comment thread develops and several anonymice join the conversation.

Anonymouse, you can address 26thNC by that name and you don't have to guess. He can't address you as anything other as Anonymous and then try to describe which of the many anonymous comments he is responding to.

It's only polite to be a recognisable contributor when you join a conversation. And if you consider yourself to be an intelligent contributor to a conversation, surely you would want to own your opinions?

If you don't wish to register a name, do as regular commentator A.Merryman (the man from Sherwood Forest) does, and simply put an identifier at the foot of your comment.

Keep yourself nice,

Lue

I find myself in a rare state of agreement with you. I have made similar comments myself. I think of all the discussions/arguments that we have had, and how klugy they would have been without our handles, as anonymous as they might be.

I think 27thNC chose his/her handle deliberately, and I consider it rude. The first time I saw it I was taken aback as the point of view was so off from what I was expecting before I realized it was 26thNV>

I should have said "Before I realized that it WASN'T 26thNC!"

Nothing beats sharing a hot wife.

And why do this? Is there some deep purpose that I don't comprehend? It doesn't seem to me to be especially clever.

sbrooks103x and 26thNC are both reasonable people with reasoned contributions to the commentaries. I don't always (or often with SB) agree with them, but their comments and opinions are worthy of consideration.

I would be fascinated to know the reason behind somebody (or somebodies) registering these similar handles to two regular commenters. It's only happened in the last day or so. And who's next?

Lue

nothing like a hot wife mine love to go out and dance with other men with short dresses halter tops no panties some times its a country bar we are known there yes we are bi sexual everybody knows it and doesn't have a problem with it. and some times we go to a hip hop bar mostly black people there's always 4 to 8 white couple;s there they are so the wife can get some black cock.

I just discovered sbrooks103y, and I didn't notice the y at first. Seems a lot of trouble to go to in order to troll a couple of people. At least sbrooks103x is an author, I am a nobody. Thanks for the kind words.

Sounds like something your boy swingerjoe would think was funny. He's been missing the last couple of days.

After such a great party to have to go back to a boring life. But some of the users here can relate...right gmann?

I think he may also be Impo_65.

as a case study for a long time couple contemplating extracurricular fun, but is now circling the drain. 3 pages of sex? Not what I am looking for, I like the stories that deal with the tension between the couple these activities produce, and this has devolved into a stroker piece.

I think patillie may be gmann57. Or maybe it was luedon, who knows?

The territory is so open for your exploration. An extra m in Kimi, add one to Vandemonium1, use a lower case i for Blackrandl, put an e on the end of Javmor, and what you might do to Harddaysknight hardly bears thinking about.

Lue

You is too smart, coming up with these clever variations in the names. Could good old Luedont be doing this? Why can't we all disagree peacefully?

... and to think it all began with a harmless little fantasy about the pool boy ...

Loved the story and the many twists and turns that it took. Great writing. Looking forward to some more.

Forget the negativity, if they didn’t like it, they shouldn’t have read it.

Love the story, liked the m to f rimming, wojld love to read of Bills first mm rim and see how he likes to take his first cock. Makes me hot thinking about it, i can feel my pucker twitching xx

Casey applauding you on a deliciously naughty story that captures everything I love in a relationship, open free thinking sharing while still knowing that you have your soul mate and that wont change. Bill and "Crissy" are a lot like my wife and I, but the way you captured the scene and how the main two ppl tested and pushed what they thought were their limits totally embodies what I really enjoy!

My new Favorite Author

Mind blowing. Hope it's ok with you I replaced the name Chrystal in my head, as I was reading with my wife's name. Hehe. So horny and dripping pre cum throught all 4 chapters. More, more, more

Thanks, Luuv!

Do I mind? Hell, no! I'm honored that you would insert your wife into my stories! I hope that she enjoys them, too, and that at least some of them become reality for the two of you!

Love,

Casey

I love the build up! I can’t wait for more!

What I wouldn't give for a membership to a club like that! Keep writing!

It seems it has been awhile since this story but would love to see it revisited. So many opportunities for exploration. Pool boy and his girlfriend and the escalation of public exhibitionism. I hope you will consider a continuation

I love ALL your topics! Sex with strangers to incest, incredible! Definitely stroking material! What with all your creative writings, is your sex life similar? If it is, you've been a very busy person! If not, where does your creativity come from? I look forward to more of your compositions!

Fantastic work and execution of how they work into the swingers scene.

The last time I saw and experienced all that was at La Trapeze in NYC long ago. It's nice to see someone come to terms with their sexuality and her husband too. As the others below suggested, another chapter will be enjoyed.