All Comments on 'The Power of Steve - Broken Husband Pt. 01'

Not bad. You need more dialogue, and it could be less formal.

Another thing is the first two and a half paragraphs are prelude - you don't need to explain what the reader is going to see, you just have to make it as interesting as possible so they'll keep reading.

Best of luck on the rest of the series.

Fine, she wants to be a slut, so tell her husband so he can make his own decision.