All Comments on 'The Princess and her Suitors Ch. 05'

Just let me say that this was poorly thought out and badly written. And NEVER change categories mid-story. Especially don't come into the most contentious category on Literotica and expect a warm welcome. Nobody is going to go back and read 4 chapters in other categories. You're going to get bombed.

1 star

5 scores so far and all 1 !

OK.... I'm a new writer here and looks like I need to learn !

I thought was at least an interesting experiment.

Let's see, I/T, E/V, E/V, Group, Loving Wives. THAT will go over well!

Your experiment didn't work. Readers won't be very interested in a final chapter of a five part story floating up in LW. I wouldn't follow a good story all across Literotica.

Should have skipped that middle section. My 4’s and 5’s for earlier chapters turned into a 1 here, only because there’s no Zero.