All Comments on 'The Product Ch. 07'

This is one of the best I have read, and considering that many more chapters are yet to come, it has a lot of promise. I felt that the story was moving a little too fast since Jane went back to her room and lay crying on the bed. There are places where I felt you could have filled with more details and told us what went on in Jane's mind. Jane's fantasy as revealed in this chapter gives an interesting twist. Can't wait to read more of her adventures at the ranch!

That was horrific. I will never read anything on this site again. What is erotic about a woman orchestrating a terrifying gang-rape on a frankly rather simple-minded woman who hasn't figured out she's being exploited? Her reaction is a little UNDERstated, but should tell you that you've gone way too f-ing far.