All Comments on 'The Rose'

Absolutely awesome, the story reminds me of my life and wonderful loving partner. Love John

I liked the story for many of its elements - though it did leave some loose ends - but the writing was plagued from beginning to end with tense shifts, many of which were jarringly distracting when they occurred.

There were some other problems, but nothing that wouldn't be caught and cured by a good editor.

I believe that, with the help of a good editor (and every writer needs one) your writing could become outstanding.

I agree with the 2 earlier comments. 5 stars from me!

The first paragraph was written in past tense while the next one was in present tense.

How difficult is it to stay in just.one?

Very distracting and when you go to the trouble of building a good story only to spoil it in that way is annoying.

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