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by Foxee Browne

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Foxee BrowneFoxee Brownealmost 17 years agoAuthor
This was

supposed to be entered under non-erotic ... not e/v ... sigh.

drksideofthemoondrksideofthemoonalmost 17 years ago
A Delight

I loved it! I can feel the wind from the Alberta prairies as I read it...

TE999TE999almost 17 years ago
Yeee...Haaaa !

That's a cattle drive those cowboys won't forget! Great story, darlin'. It was a fun read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
sunny side up

Good, but would have been better with a little sex out in the pasture!

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101almost 17 years ago
A fun read.

There was no sex in it, but enough nudity. You don't need sex in every story, but you could have put it in E/V.

walkingeaglewalkingeaglealmost 17 years ago
Good job! Fun story!

Good job1 I really enjoyed this! It's a fun story--it could continue---

Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Fun fun fun!

I happen to live in the west, and could see the cowboy's reaction. You made me wonder how much was true and how much wasn't. Which is the way a good story should be.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
:)

This one made me grin.

Good luck in the contest!

Maharat

glynndahglynndahalmost 17 years ago
A fine entry

I enjoyed reading your story.

RogueLurkerRogueLurkeralmost 17 years ago
a fun read ...

great story, geekychick. Perhaps Ang Lee will do a movie "Barebutt Mountain" ... Well done and best of luck in the contest.

fanfarefanfareabout 9 years ago
amusing tale of cottontails...

...butt I gotta wonder...who the hell was holding a gun on the cowboys? To keep them to their side of the creek!

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