All Comments on 'The Sauna'

Well written and a promising introduction to a realistic expanding realm of sexual adventures. But ending seemed too abrupt and ant-climatic. Understandable if this was a true story, but unsatisfying for fiction.

Thanks for the feedback @NHoldguy. Yes, it was a true story. The ending could have gone differently, but for now I'm writing about real experiences. I've thought about how it might have gone had we stayed the night, but honestly it probably would have just been even less sleep and no sex. Maybe one day I'll get into writing fiction.