by 123lit1234
Premise OK.
But too rushed. All three chapters are as if they're in a 100-yard dash, in a hurry to get to the finish line.
He pulled the vibe out? Huh? When did he put it in? And if he did put it in, what did it do to her? How did she react? How did she keep from cumming?
Meh.
Three stars.