All Comments on 'The Secrete Slave: Suhana Pt. 04'

It is a good plot but you need to be careful as with the last chapter you had a lot repetition paragraphs. then in this one you said her family was stirring then no one was up so she fixed herself a pancake then the next paragraph you stated she was sitting with family at the table. Even though this a work of fiction you need to be careful with some reality as in someone sleep with stuffed and tape mouth will pass out and might even die.

Pappasleaze!

Hey Thanks for suggestions and love to get more. But the first one you stated is not an actual error. I used some paraphrase tool and it recorrect it. Later one is I know little exaggeration that ; sleeping with something in your mouth, but if you noticed I wrote that she rarely slept. It was her punishment. And I think it can be a punishment, isn't it?

This the story of a submissive exploring her nature which she wasn't aware of for a long time. Tell me if I am wrong. And thanks once again for suggestions