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All Comments on 'The Softest Skin'

by baronlee

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
The. Sentences. Are. Too. Short.

It's okay to break things up with a few shorter sentences, but not the whole story. The story just didn't flow for me.

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