All Comments on 'The Suburban Mom Pt. 04'

by The_Veil_of_Isis

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PappasleazePappasleaze11 months ago

It seems as though this suburban mom is the pass around variety. I love it. I hope it continues with both older and younger women. I also home she gives way more than she receives. was hoping to see more control of the scene from the pastor's wife. Great job. Thanks for sharing

Inthehole93Inthehole9311 months ago

This is a very sexual piece of writing. The church scenario opens up so many possibilities, and the illicit nature of the encounters certainly adds to the frisson of excitement you so ably generate.

I look forward to more of your creativity.

FarmerRon1955FarmerRon195511 months ago

Once again, this was an absolutely amazing story!! It's as extra-erotic due to the invitation to a supposed religious activity but was a secret lesbian rendezvous for a group of "Christian" lesbians!! I loved it when Marcia and Lana were instructed to "show each other the love commanded by the Lord"! Yet again, I had no choice but give it a measly 5 stars my dear, as it was also worthy of many more!! I can only pray to the Lord above that chapter 5 of this titillating series is soon to be here for us to read and enjoy!! Please????? More eroticism for us, your avid readers?????? I'm so very happy that you've been blessed with such amazing curiosity and imagination!! As always, please keep up your excellent writing!! I'm definitely hooked on reading your great works!!! 😘😘💕

evekendalevekendal11 months ago

You have a very economical but effective way of distinguishing between your characters. Marcia we know - she’s attractive, smart and curious. Lana is a wonderful portrayal of a selfish and ignorant pretty girl, who is at bottom rather dull. As for Michelle, she appears to be like a Nazi women’s camp commandant one minute and like your cuddly older lesbian guide the next. Charlene as her long-term lover is memorable too. Then there’s Vesna - very well fleshed out too.

More please!

The_Veil_of_IsisThe_Veil_of_Isis11 months agoAuthor

Thank you everyone for your encouraging words. Marcia will, I sincerely hope, continue to share her love for her co-congregationalists, those she is close to, and people who chance to cross her path. I feel that unlike Lana she has a lot more to give.

AmbulAmbul11 months ago

Very erotic, and very imaginative.

liz33ndliz33nd10 months ago

that was a hard right turn, different but entertaining.

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I am in my mid/late twenties and love painting and handcrafting. I have recently started writing again, encouraged by the success of a short story in an online competition. I took a creative writing minor at college. I am straight but bicurious.

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